Talk:Data Retention

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Second person language

The language in this article should be rewritten so it doesn't say "you". For example as in the introduction,

If you thought that your government had long term access to all your communication, including what you type in your personal emails, chat, web-forums and all of your phone communication you might be less inclined to express your opinions about your government? Heavens forbid we don’t want to be labeled a non-patriot by our respective governments.

The language should be more neutral and encyclopedic. Optimist 23:09, 13 July 2007 (CDT)